Miss Decemberby =xDarkNecroFearx

Traditional Art / Drawings / People

This is Millenia. She's mine and wolfys OC. She's 15 and uses sex to fill the void of her missing parents and it's all her brother uses her for. So this is her being cute for the camera. The candy canes and presents are a backdrop

Critique by ~sskd1804 Dec 31, 2012, 11:59:28 AM

ok I relly haven't seen one that was made like this, I really do think that this shoukld be revized a bit, why is the girl laying on a piece a nothing, what is the mood the feel? what is her backround?? whats in the back is she outside or in?? Is she waiting for someone or is she just sitting around, what if someone was watching her?? how would the viewers view this would they think, oh I just wasted my time on this or do you think that they enjoy seeing a girl around in her bra and undies, is this how you title every girl?? I hope this helps you!!

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